So this is Thorn he is Shuichi's stallion. I don't exactly know how old Thorn is.... but he was once Richard's horse (Lumiere's father). Story: little is known about from where Thorn came from. All that is known is that several horses like him have served the royal family of the Kingdom. Thorn has served Richard in his many hunts and yearly horse racing contests. He was a very loyal horse. Some might consider him a warhorse, but he has never seen war, nor has the Kingdom. ''war'' was a unknown term in that region. After Richard's death, Thorn was held in chains by his sister, Cassiopeia. Thorn would never let anyone in the castle sleep at night, he knew that something bad had happened and he wanted to make sure that the one who killed his master would pay. He never did like Cassiopeia, but now he had even more of a reason to hate her. One night, Cassiopeia entered the stables where Thorn was held and started to whip him. Thorn took many blows, but resisted as long as he could. But after being hit on his right eye, he collapsed and fell to the ground, laying motionless. Cassiopeia considered him dead, and ordered a palace guard to through him into the nearest river. Thorn floated down the streams until he passed Shuichi's house. Shuichi brought him to shore, and nursed him back to health. But Thorn had remained half blind with his right eye, and the scar had never healed. Thorn would be the first horse that Lumiere had ever ridden, and also he would be the one to bring her back to the Kingdom after she would be exiled. A true hero and friend
My story really seems to be taking shape made some more characters, decided on the beginning and ending, the middle is coming along too. I only need to figure out a few more things Hope you like him